Question: I like how you made it very persuasive because when I read it, I wanted to go to all those planets especially I really want to see Saturn's spectacular rings but I was trying to say that in the future you might try to put more information on the Milky Way and the sun because it was very little writing.
I like the way how you were telling about everything, but in the future you might try to be more decorated, because it'll look more niceer and more fun to read !
What makes our Solar System unique? Lots of things but one of them is because it has life form. Life form is things that Eat, sleep, live and, die and we have found no life form in any other Solar System. Another one is that we have a giant star that we call the Sun. It has been alive for trillions of years and it lights up our Solar System ,but in other Solar Systems they have no star or don’t have a star that lives that long.
An a additional one is that we have 8 planets exactly. Other Solar Systems have more or less than 8 planets. Lastly, two planets that are too small to be regular planets ,so call Dwarf-Planets. But, other Solar Systems don’t have Dwarf-Planets. Those are some of the many reasons why are Solar System is unique.
Polish:
ReplyDeleteI like how you decorated your brochure because it focused me on that page,but in the future you might try making it bigger and check it.
Question:
ReplyDeleteI like how you made it very persuasive because when I read it, I wanted to go to all those planets especially I really want to see Saturn's spectacular rings but I was trying to say that in the future you might try to put more information on the Milky Way and the sun because it was very little writing.
Polish:
ReplyDeleteI like the way how you were telling about everything, but in the future you might try to be more decorated, because it'll look more niceer and more fun to read !
Reflection
ReplyDeleteWhat makes our Solar System unique? Lots of things but one of them is because it has life form. Life form is things that Eat, sleep, live and, die and we have found no life form in any other Solar System. Another one is that we have a giant star that we call the Sun. It has been alive for trillions of years and it lights up our Solar System ,but in other Solar Systems they have no star or don’t have a star that lives that long.
An a additional one is that we have 8 planets exactly. Other Solar Systems have more or less than 8 planets. Lastly, two planets that are too small to be regular planets ,so call Dwarf-Planets. But, other Solar Systems don’t have Dwarf-Planets. Those are some of the many reasons why are Solar System is unique.