Polish: I really like how you added fun facts and "Few Words", because it made me grin and i felt really excited! But next time you can try to not add so many same words. :) Thank You!
What is in the solar system that makes unique? I learned a lot from making the solar system brochure by learning its unique characteristics. The solar system is unique for its sun and belts and planets. Earth is especially unique for its water because it is the only planet that has it. Mercury is unique for being fast and closest planet from the sun. Venus is unique for its mixing of water and lava with its beauty. Earth is special for its water and humans like us. Mars is unique for being red and the air is what we breathe out, carbon dioxide. The asteroid belt is unique for its asteroids and unique pathway. Jupiter is unique for its Great Red Spot. Uranus is unique for being a gas giant. Neptune is famous of its storms and its Great Dark Spot which disappeared over 10 years ago. Pluto is unique for being the smallest and farthest planet from the sun. Everything in the solar system has something unique that we will someday all learn.
The most standing out evidence that makes a difference is mostly Earth. It is probably the only planet in the universe that has what we drink everyday: water. I think it is the most reasonable evidence that makes our solar system unique.
Polish:
ReplyDeleteI really like how you added fun facts and "Few Words", because it made me grin and i felt really excited! But next time you can try to not add so many same words. :)
Thank You!
Viktoria
Praise: I like the way you told them not to come to the gas giants planets because it shows you creativity.
ReplyDeleteQuestion: I like how you put so many details because it shows your creativity.
Polish: I like how you where specific because it shows that you are really dedicated to your work but i am wondering why did you write so little?
What is in the solar system that makes unique? I learned a lot from making the solar system brochure by learning its unique characteristics. The solar system is unique for its sun and belts and planets. Earth is especially unique for its water because it is the only planet that has it. Mercury is unique for being fast and closest planet from the sun. Venus is unique for its mixing of water and lava with its beauty. Earth is special for its water and humans like us. Mars is unique for being red and the air is what we breathe out, carbon dioxide. The asteroid belt is unique for its asteroids and unique pathway. Jupiter is unique for its Great Red Spot. Uranus is unique for being a gas giant. Neptune is famous of its storms and its Great Dark Spot which disappeared over 10 years ago. Pluto is unique for being the smallest and farthest planet from the sun. Everything in the solar system has something unique that we will someday all learn.
ReplyDeleteThe most standing out evidence that makes a difference is mostly Earth. It is probably the only planet in the universe that has what we drink everyday: water.
I think it is the most reasonable evidence that makes our solar system unique.