Polish: I like how you did a lot of pictures and you had words jumping every where in different colors and sizes,but in the future you might try writing more words From: Dima
Polish: I like how you were adding alot of pictures, because it shows alot of creativity, with alot of persuase to come to the Solar System, but in the future you might try to put more words/facts as pictures, so the Aliens could know more about the place !
Polish:
ReplyDeleteI like how you did a lot of pictures and you had words jumping every where in different colors and sizes,but in the future you might try writing more words
From: Dima
I like how you added all the pictures , but in the future you might try adding more facts or details to your writing.
ReplyDeleteI like how you choose the right pictures to show the details but in the future you should add more facts.
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Polish: I like how you were adding alot of pictures, because it shows alot of creativity, with alot of persuase to come to the Solar System, but in the future you might try to put more words/facts as pictures, so the Aliens could know more about the place !
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