Polish Wow! It's really good, because you added colors, pictures, and lots and lots of facts!!! But next time you try no to add so many "Did you knows". Thank You! :)
I think that universe is unique because it has many different facts. Some aren't even figured out yet. Also because through out the years some planets change. I didn't know that astriodes could have moons. It was very interesting to me. I don't know if it was interesting to others. The solar system is an awesome place. On other planets you weigh different. On earth i way 90 pounds and on Neptune i weigh 30 pounds. How do I know? When i went to the Griffith Park observatory. I was amazed how much i weighed on pluto. I think the universe is unique because there is a place where stars are born it is called a nubela. This is the end of my reflection.
Here's my feedback: Praise: I like how you said please because it shows they will come. Question: I like how you said go green,but I am wondering,why aren't there any fun facts? Polish: I like how you said no littering,but in the future you might try not to say too many did you knows or the aliens won't like it. From, Evana
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ReplyDeleteWow! It's really good, because you added colors, pictures, and lots and lots of facts!!! But next time you try no to add so many "Did you knows".
Thank You! :)
Viktoria
I think that universe is unique because it has many different facts. Some aren't even figured out yet. Also because through out the years some planets change. I didn't know that astriodes could have moons. It was very interesting to me. I don't know if it was interesting to others. The solar system is an awesome place. On other planets you weigh different. On earth i way 90 pounds and on Neptune i weigh 30 pounds. How do I know? When i went to the Griffith Park observatory. I was amazed how much i weighed on pluto. I think the universe is unique because there is a place where stars are born it is called a nubela. This is the end of my reflection.
ReplyDeleteHere's my feedback:
ReplyDeletePraise: I like how you said please because it shows they will come.
Question: I like how you said go green,but I am wondering,why aren't there any fun facts?
Polish: I like how you said no littering,but in the future you might try not to say too many did you knows or the aliens won't like it.
From,
Evana