Polish: I like how you were very creative in your writing but in the future you might try to put more information on the planets and try to include the all the nine planets. Also you can maybe try to put more information.
Reflection There is lots of things that make our solar system unique. there is bugs, insects and amphibians. There is a lot of life on earth like us humans there is over a billion life on earth.
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ReplyDeletePraise: I like how you put some details because it helps the reader understand more about our solar system.From: Ariana
ReplyDeletePolish: I like how you were very creative in your writing but in the future you might try to put more information on the planets and try to include the all the nine planets. Also you can maybe try to put more information.
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ReplyDeleteThere is lots of things that make our solar system unique. there is bugs, insects and amphibians. There is a lot of life on earth like us humans there is over a billion life on earth.
Question: I like how you were creative but i am wondering why you didn't write all the planets
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